Georgia Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Georgia Investors

United States > Georgia

Looking for investment opportunities in businesses with unique selling proposition. I have an MBA from a top tier business school and other charters in finance and investment management. Happy to be a silent partner or a business advisor.

$10,000 to $25,000

United States > Georgia

I'm an individual investor that enjoys working in various industries. In addition to my investment in your firm, I'm willing to act as a passive investor, an advisor, or take on part-time operational roles as necessary. I can help refine your plans and build your business. Education: BA-Johns Hopkins (Economics). MBA - Northwestern University (Kellogg) - (Marketing & Finance). Experience: Product management for NYSE-listed electronics company. Marketing management & business development for international food ingredients company. Founded and sold small advertising media technology company. Founded, operated (for 25 years) and sold nationally-recognized niche consulting firm within commercial real estate industry. Also own/ experienced in retail (Bricks-Mortar and on-line), international brands, various real estate investments. Geographically flexible, but investments in Atlanta area and Florida are preferred.

$5,000 to $300,000

United States > Georgia

I am interested in a silent partnership. However, I maybe be able to help with the business from time-to-time as a consultant when ideas are needed but the business owner would make the final decision. I do currently invest in real estate and stocks (mostly real estate stocks). I am interested in the education field and the healthcare filed. I have been a teacher, school counselor, real estate agent, tax consultant and I have owned a small business online. I also have a PhD in Education with a focus on distance learning.

$1 to $25,000

United States > Georgia

A trust with assets in excess of $5 million, income exceeding $200,000 in each of the two most recent years or joint income with a spouse exceeding $300,000 for those years. Looking for investment opportunities.

$50,000 to $100,000

United States > Georgia

My name is Joseph. I own a telecommunications company and I'm looking to expand my portfolio. I'm based out of Jackson Co. GA, and would love to find companies or ideas somewhat local to me that either I can help them grow or start.

$1 to $50,000

Israel > Georgia

I am a private financial investor representing myself and other investors. I have resided in Florida for several year and hold a degree in Finance from Florida International University. I am interested in investing in commercial and mix-used property developments. I am looking for investment opportunities where I can provide cash as part of the needed funding for new projects.

$500,000 to $2,000,000

United States > Georgia

I am just starting out in private investing. I have been in the manufacturing industry for 18 years. Looking to have an equity stake in a business or project.

$15,000 to $100,000,000

United States > Georgia

20 years lending and asset management for Fortune 100 commercial bank. Represent diverse group of institutional and individual investors seeking angel or venture capital opportunities.

$500,000 to $30,000,000