Georgia Investment Network

Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Georgia Investors

United States > Georgia

29 Year Old Male. Atlanta, GA. Individual Investor. Bachelors Degree in Marketing. 10 years of experience investing in startups. Heavily invested in entertainment and financial industry. Willing to be hands on and silent

$1,000 to $100,000

United States > Georgia

I am an individual investor looking to help someone who wishes to pursue his or her dream of success with a minimal role on my end. I have a background in commercial and industrial cabinetry and control center operations. I’ve traveled all over the country contracting for the government and military along with various private companies. I’ve come to believe that I need to plan my retirement which is decades away, along with the potential to leave something behind for my children by taking a chance at investing. I believe there are more creative and capable people out there than myself and would be glad to help someone chase after their success.

$5,000 to $40,000

United States > Georgia

I’m a 47 year old corporate executive that is looking to invest in the next big thing. My background is in Human Resources Management, Procurement Management and Supply Chain Management. I’ve supported multiple industries from local government to fortune 100 management consulting firms leading complex business operations and strategic planning. I am seeking advisory and silent investor opportunities as an individual investor.

$0 to $20,000

United States > Georgia

looking for real deals that make sense for me and my investors. deals that can make money on great returns.

$1,000,000 to $8,000,000,000

United States > Georgia

With over 25 years of experience in strategic investing, I focus on companies with strong growth potential and promising market positions, emphasizing medium to long-term development to maximize returns. I provide capital, expertise, and strategic support to accelerate growth, working closely with management to address challenges and stimulate success. My approach includes mitigating risks, developing portfolios, negotiating ventures, and driving innovation through active involvement and sound strategic planning. I am particularly interested in early-stage, high-growth humanitarian, sustainable, environmental, or socially responsible businesses primed for rapid expansion with adequate funding.

$50,000 to $1,740,000

United States > Georgia

I have been in the financial services arena for nearly 20 years. In typical recession time - great companies are born. With the stock market turmoil I would like to consider helping/investing in revolutionary business potentials. I will not consider or waste time reviewing "idea's" - I will consider investments in prototype technology based solutions. I want to see growth opportunity businesses that are scaleable and unique. I want to participate with founder money not be the sole investor in someone's idea. I am direct and fair and very easy to get along with as a shareholder. No matter how good the deal is - if you have to "sell me" - I am not interested. I will either feel it or I won't and I will let you know right away.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > Georgia

Past co-founder of a tech company with successful exit, current fortune 50 executive in software industry. Mechanical engineering background, experience advising startups.

$1 to $30,000

United States > Georgia

I'm an entrepreneur in the information technology space. I recently sold a company I helped build and will consider angel opportunities while I'm on sabbatical for the next year or two. I am an experienced senior manager and entrepreneur and will also be willing to provide non-financial support to an organization I invest in.

$5,000 to $100,000